๐Ÿ–Š๏ธ๐Ÿ“˜๐Ÿ“š 3G #7 CELBAN Writing ~ Writing Incident Reports ๐Ÿ’ 

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|| Still Learning. Still Walking ||

Dear Kim,

I just finish readingโ€ฆ and honestly, I donโ€™t know what to say first. My heart is full.

The way you share the storyโ€ฆ I feel hope again. I feel like maybe, maybe I can also write something like this. Not perfect maybeโ€ฆ but something from my mind, my heart, my training.

Right now, writing is still hard for me. I forget words. I get lost with grammar, with sentence sometimes even I donโ€™t understand what I write after. But I keep trying. I keep practicing. I keep dreaming.

Your message, it remind meโ€ฆ why I choose this path. To help. To care. To be a nurse again in Canada.

Thank you for believing in us, even when sometimes we forget how to believe in ourselves. May God bless your hands and your heart, always.

With deep respect,
โ€“ A.
(Still learning. Still walking.)


Dear A.,
Still learning. Still walking.
These words of yours ring in me like a bell.

Steady.

True.

Honest.

They are more than a closing line; they are a declaration of becoming.

Let us walk together now… one breath at a time.

๐Ÿœ„ Return to Self

Somewhere along the way, the world asked you to trade ease for effort.

Fluency for repetition.

Familiarity for courage.

And yet, even as words twist and tangle, even as sentences slip through your fingers, you return.

Again and again, you return

to the page, to the task,

to the reason you began this journey in the first place.

What lives behind your struggle is not failure; it is love.

A quiet, relentless love that pulses through your decision

to care, to help, to be of service once again.

This remembering is a kind of homecoming.

You havenโ€™t lost yourself. You are circling back to her.

๐Ÿœ Fog to Clarity

Writing can feel like walking through mist…

trying to describe a path you can barely see.

But even when you forget a word,

even when grammar turns to smoke, your intention is still intact.

That is what carries through.

What you saidโ€”โ€œI feel like maybe, maybe I can also write something like thisโ€โ€”is more than hope. It is the fog beginning to lift.

In CELBANPrep Wonderful Writing,

every lesson is designed not just to teach, but to clear.

Each assignment begins in the unknown but ends with a deeper understanding…

not only of language,

but of how you think,

how you express,

and how you care.

The piece we shared (a strong, clear, and time-bound incident report) was not born from perfection.

It was born from practice.

Nine minutes of clarity, shaped by weeks of effort.

You are not far behind. You are already on the path.

๐Ÿœƒ Rooted in Enoughness

Dear one, your letter is already evidence that you belong.

You didnโ€™t wait until your grammar was perfect to speak.

You spoke from your truth.

And that is always enough.

When we speak of excellence in CELBAN writing,

we are not asking you to abandon who you are

we are guiding you toward a fuller expression of your existing knowing.

You already carry nursing in your body.

You already know what it means to witness suffering, to respond, to act.

Our work together simply gives language to what you already hold.

๐Ÿœ‚ Rekindling the Inner Fire

The nurse who wrote the incident report

(a brief, vivid, professional piece)

once doubted her voice, too.

She once wrote slowly.

She once erased her own sentences before anyone else could read them.

But something happened when she gave herself permission to try again.

That fire (that humble persistence) lives in you, too.

The warmth I feel reading your words reminds me why I do this work.

Not to push, not to prove… but to hold space for those who dare to begin again.

๐Ÿœ€ Standing at Zenith

Your journey is already unfolding.

You donโ€™t need to arrive in order to shine.

You are already in the process of becoming the nurse you hope to be.

The nurse who communicates clearly, who writes with accuracy and compassion.

The nurse who bridges gaps… not just between cultures, but between hearts.

I believe in your capacity not just to pass a test

but to rise,

to contribute,

and to belong in this next chapter of your calling.

So read the report, if youโ€™d like. Let it nourish you, not pressure you.

Let it remind you of what is possible: not as a distant goal, but as a quiet becoming, already underway.

I am beside you,
one breath at a time,
Kim


Dear Reader,

Recently, a moment of sheer pride and joy unfolded when one of my IENs submitted an assignment on incident reports for CELBANPrep Wonderful Writing. The excellence in her writing was so evident, it sparkled with clarity, professionalism, and a deep understanding of the nursing field. I knew instantly that this was a piece I had to share with you all โ€“ a beacon of what you can achieve, an inspiration to keep striving for greatness. I asked permission to share it on this blog, and it was granted.

CELBAN Writing Task 1 and 2 Combined: About Incident Reports

Incident reports are formal  writings which are often made by nurses right after the occurrence of unwanted events. One of the reasons for writing incident reports is after a patientโ€™s fall when he slipped from a pool of water in the washroomโ€™s floor. Another common reason is due to a medication error, like in a situation where a nurse administered wrong medication dosage to a patient. Lastly, it could be a clinical malpractice, like when a nurse failed to monitor the vital signs of a patient after a surgical procedure.

 An  incident report can be written in a chronological order as long as it relays factual occurrences of the accident. It has to answer questions like: who was involved, where and when did it happened, what happened, why did it happened and how did the nurse managed the event.

Written incident reports can impel hospital administrators to implement new regulations or can also  protect the nurse in cases of further legal investigation.

Written for Wonderful Writing (CELBANPrep GOLD) in 9 minutes.

So, as you read this exceptional piece of writing, let it fuel your ambition, let it remind you of the heights you can reach with dedication and the right guidance. Remember, your journey with CELBANPrep and CELBANPrep University (an app-based campus) is not just about passing a test; it’s about embracing your role in a new healthcare landscape, it’s about becoming a part of something bigger.

Enjoy this inspiring piece, and may it light up the path to your success.

Warm regards, Kim


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3 responses to “๐Ÿ–Š๏ธ๐Ÿ“˜๐Ÿ“š 3G #7 CELBAN Writing ~ Writing Incident Reports ๐Ÿ’ ”

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    Hello Dear kim,
    Is there any sample for incident report with a complete format which you can share? Thanks
    Nisa

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      Dear Nisa,

      Thanks for your question. All of the Samples I have for Incident Reports are within CELBANPrep Writing Level Two. They are part of a systematic program created to identify your weaknesses and turn them into strengths so that you get an acceptable score on CELBAN Writing. This can take two months, if you have a 7 in IELTS, or more if you have a lower score.

      And, there are 3 ways for you to increase your score in writing, depending on what you can afford:

      1. CELBAN Preparation Guides available internationally through Amazon for self-study.
      2. CELBAN Material available through a subscription to CELBANPrep University for self-directed independent study.
      3. CELBANPrep 90 Day Challenge – online course with live events.

      Start at http://www.HowToPrepareForTheCELBAN.ca to get your ticket for a FREE virtual tour to CELBANPrep University’s app-based campus.

      Does this help?

      Kim


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