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πŸ”– Are you looking for CELBAN reviewers for reading, writing, listening and speaking?

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Kim Kara, the founder of CELBANPrep University, has been preparing IENs like you for the CELBAN since 2009. Learn the secret to preparing for the CELBAN that WISE IENs know about passing the exam through this quick 4-minute video.

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πŸ“± Writing Sample ~ CELBAN Assessment Reports: turning weaknesses into strengths

Updated 2021

Dear Friends,

For CELBANPrep Writing IENs are encouraged to write both incident reports and assessment reports. Each assignment is reviewed several times, by a writing coach for the Writing Tutoring. Every once in a while I read a report that stands out. I am posting this one online, with permission from the writer.

Please pay attention to the following:

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πŸ“±3G* β™« Now I have a confidence in my writing!

Updated 2021

Hi Kim,

Now I have a confidence in my writing. When I wrote a letter to my supervisor, I could identify my errors. Run on sentences, verbs, punctuation and articles.
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πŸ“± * CELBAN Writing ~ Incident Report. Can you spot the errors?

Updated 2021

Dear Friends,

This is a great incident report written for CELBAN Writing during the CELBANPrep Writing . It is well written, except for a few errors. Can you identify the errors?

Kim

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2G* Β§ How would you correct this sentence? CELBAN Writing: Report Writing

Update 2021

Dear Friends,

This comes from a posted assignment, for the CELBANPrep Writing Level Two How would you correct it?

On July 19thΒ at 20:30H, at St. Matthews Hospital, Kim Sapno, 14 year old girl admitted in emergency room accompanied by her mother. She had a complained of right lower abdominal pain.

Try rewriting these sentences before you click on read more to see some of my suggestions. Which do you prefer and why?

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3G* CELBAN or IELTS: writing reviewer

Update in 2021

Hi,

I want to purchase CELBAN Writing Task Specially Writing Task 1 can you send me the link form your website so that I can proceed.
 
Thanks, A
 

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πŸ¦ƒβ˜Ί You always makes me feel more confident and less stressful

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Here is an example of an incident report written by an Internationally Educated Nurse who completedΒ CELBANPrep online course: CELBAN Writing Task 1 and CELBAN Writing Task 1. (She used CELBANPrep Writing, and accessed Writing Coaching through CELBANPrep University.) Β This is the result after several revisions. What follows is a discussion between me and the IEN who wrote the report.

Here is an example of an incident report...

Incident: 75 year old man found on the floor

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1G* CELBAN Writing Task 2: How would you correct this? (Medical Collocations)

Updated 2021

Dear Friend

June 10, 2021 at 10 am. Sara, a 14 y/o girl who had been diagnosed with juvenile diabetes, came to clinic with her mother. She complained of dizziness and feeling of fatigue.

What are the correct collocations for the sentence in purple? How would you correct it? There are several ways of doing it. Test your knowledge of medical collocations.

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1G* β™« What is writing in nursing context and how it will come in the CELBAN exam

Update 2021

Dear Kim,
Kim I need your help because I am not able to understand what is writing in nursing context and how it will come in exam? Thanks D 

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3G* I would like to ask about writing and speaking if you can give me free prep.

Updated 2021

 
Dear Kim,
 
You are of great help. I would like to ask about writing and speaking if you can give me free prep… I hope to hear from you and I started doing the reading and listening prep and making a good job on it.
 
Sincerely,

Maria

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