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Updated 2023
Updated 2023
Dear Friend,
Every once in a while I post a report written by an IEN for CELBAN Writing during the CELBANPrep Writing one-on-one coaching (sold separately). Today I am posting this sample to show you that it is possible to write a complete, detailed and organized report in 20 minutes. This one was posted with only one small error. Here is my comment:
Wow, R! … Perfect! How was the timing? She replied:
Dear Kim
Horaaaaaaaaay, I did it in 20 minutes… I hope that I can do it in a real exam.
Check out the report she wrote! Notice how complete it is. Can you write a report like this, and have it this organized, in 20 minutes or less? ~Kim
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Updated 2023
Dear Friends,
For CELBANPrep Wonderful Writing IENs are encouraged to write both incident reports and assessment reports. When hiring one-on-one coaching, each assignment is reviewed several times, by a writing coach. Every once in a while I read a report that stands out. I am posting this one online, with permission from the writer.
Please pay attention to the following:
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Updated 2023
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Updated 2023
Dear Friends,
This is a great incident report written for CELBAN Writing during the CELBANPrep’s Wonderful Writing (CELBANPrep GOLD) . It is well written, except for a few errors. Can you identify the errors?
Kim
Update 2021
Dear Friends,
This comes from a posted assignment, for the CELBANPrep Writing Level Two How would you correct it?
On July 19th at 20:30H, at St. Matthews Hospital, Kim Sapno, 14 year old girl admitted in emergency room accompanied by her mother. She had a complained of right lower abdominal pain.
Try rewriting these sentences before you click on read more to see some of my suggestions. Which do you prefer and why?
Update 2021
Dear Friends,
How long does it take you to mind map or brainstorm a comprehensive list of details to add into an incident report?
I want you to do that:
Here is the writing prompt.
65 year old male patient found on the floor by the elevator with IV pole.
When you are done, come back to this post.
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Updated this week
Here is an example of an incident report written by an Internationally Educated Nurse who completed CELBANPrep online course: CELBAN Writing Task 1 and CELBAN Writing Task 1. (She used CELBANPrep Writing, and accessed Writing Coaching through CELBANPrep University.) This is the result after several revisions. What follows is a discussion between me and the IEN who wrote the report.
Incident: 75 year old man found on the floor
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Kim,
Why do we need to add temperature unit must and other units not? For example:
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Dear Friend,
Remember there is a difference between an illness and a disease. It is important to use these words appropriately in a medical context.
Examples of diseases and illnesses:
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Dear Kim 