๐Ÿ“š 1G CELBAN Writing Task 2: How would you correct this? (Medical Collocations)

Dear Aspiring Internationally Educated Health Professional,

Imagine you’re a healthcare professional in a bustling clinic. It’s June 10, 2021, at 10 am. Sara, a 14-year-old girl diagnosed with juvenile diabetes, walks in accompanied by her worried mother. She’s experiencing dizziness and fatigue. This scenario isn’t just a routine clinical visit; it’s a window into the intricate world of medical collocations, a crucial aspect for any Internationally Educated Health Professional (IEHP).


Unlocking the Mystery of Medical Collocations: A Real-Life Example

The Puzzle: Correcting Collocations in Everyday Clinical Encounters

Take a moment and ponder over this sentence: “She complained of dizziness and feeling of fatigue.” Does it sound right to you? If you think it does, that’s understandable. Many of us, especially non-native English speakers, unknowingly make errors in collocations โ€“ the art of word pairing in a language.

Why Collocations Matter in Healthcare Communication

Collocations are the unsung heroes of fluent and accurate communication. Before the digital era, understanding collocations was like grasping at straws โ€“ intuitive for native speakers but elusive for learners. They’re not governed by grammar rules but by usage patterns. For IEHPs, mastering medical collocations isn’t just about linguistic accuracy; it’s about building trust and clarity in every patient interaction.

Identifying and Correcting Common Collocation Errors

Let’s revisit our example: “She complained of dizziness and feeling of fatigue.” Hereโ€™s where we need to fine-tune:

  • “Dizziness” is a noun, as is “fatigue.”
  • “Dizzy” and “tired” are adjectives.

So, the correct collocations could be:

  1. “Dizziness and fatigue”
  2. “Dizziness and tiredness”
  3. “Feeling dizzy and tired”

Incorrect versions would be “dizziness and tired” or “dizzy and tiredness.” Why? Because aligning nouns with nouns and adjectives with adjectives is key to clear communication.

Your Pathway to Mastering Medical Collocations

Start with one medical collocation a day. It’s a manageable yet effective approach.

With one collocation a day, you’ll master 30 in a month, 90 in three months, and an impressive 365 in a year.

This consistent effort can significantly enhance your communication skills, making you not only a competent healthcare professional but also a relatable one.

Embarking on a Journey of Linguistic Excellence

Remember, every patient interaction is an opportunity to refine your skills. By dedicating yourself to mastering medical collocations, youโ€™re not just improving your language abilities; youโ€™re elevating the quality of care you provide. Embrace this journey of learning, and watch as your confidence and competence in the Canadian healthcare system flourish.

And that is why I dedicated over ten years to creating two dictionaries, filled with activating activities, on Medical Collocations! That you may flourish with confidence and competence in the Canadian healthcare system!

Warmest regards,

Kim


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8 responses to “๐Ÿ“š 1G CELBAN Writing Task 2: How would you correct this? (Medical Collocations)”

  1. MJ Avatar
    MJ

    Hi Kim. I received my Celban results and didn’t meet the required score. I sent a request of appeal for consideration since I had a complained being distracted during the test. We were given instructions that a video will be played along with an audio for a conversation in the group test. Most of us are bothered and lost when there was no video played at all. No one interrupted the test since we are instructed not to interrupt once the test started. I hope celban would give consideration with this concern.

    1. Kim Avatar

      Dear MJ,
      Technology is often a problem during the exam, and it is the one thing you can not control. However, the fact that no one said anything is a problem!
      In Canada nurses can not be meek, shy or quiet. Nurses must be able to advocate for patients and be able to be accountable for their actions. Anyone taking the exam and not demonstrating initiative and confidence, during speaking, is missing the point. Standing up for yourself, and your patient, is important. The CELBAN is an excellent place for you to demonstrate the skills and self worth to do so.
      I know when people are ready for the speaking part of the exam when they have learned to speak do this with strength and confidence. That is what it takes to be a nurse in Canada. So, I hope that you look for opportunities to learn and grow in this area. It is vital to your nursing career!
      Simply,
      Kim

  2. N Avatar
    N

    What about “Patient is complaining of dizziness and fatigue since last 2 days.”

    1. Kim Avatar

      Hello N,
      That is a good suggestion.
      Do you know the difference between when to use: since, or for?
      What is the difference between what you wrote and:
      “Patient has been complaining of dizziness and fatigue for the last 2 days.”
      Kim

  3. Mandeep Avatar
    Mandeep

    She revealed that she had ben experiencing dizziness and fatigue on physical exertion for last cople of days.

    1. Kim Avatar

      Nice phrasing, Mandeep. (There are a few spelling/typing mistakes though.)
      I think the medical collocation would be “upon physical exertion”.
      I just started to google this phrase so see what would come up and sure enough there were two options provided: headache upon physical exertion, dizziness upon physical exertion.
      Why do you think it is “upon” rather than “on”?
      Kim

  4. param Avatar

    she complaint dizziness.

    1. Kim Avatar

      Dear Param,

      This is a good attempt. There are two options:
      1. She complained of dizziness, or
      2. Her chief complaint was dizziness.
      There are also other options with the word dizzy.
      * She felt dizzy.
      * She complained of feeling dizzy.
      Look up the words dizzy and dizziness and see what you discover.
      By the way, these expressions are medical collocations. It is important to study your medical collocations/expressions/phrases. They are often a weakness for many IENs. Please check out the suggested resources for writing at http://www.celban.biz. They can be purchased new or used or borrowed from a library.
      Take Care,
      Kim


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