Tag Archives: CELBAN Writing Task 2

πŸ“± #5 Writing Sample ~ CELBAN Assessment Reports: turning weaknesses into strengths

Updated 2023

Dear Friends,

For CELBANPrep Wonderful Writing IENs are encouraged to write both incident reports and assessment reports. When hiring one-on-one coaching, each assignment is reviewed several times, by a writing coach. Every once in a while I read a report that stands out. I am posting this one online, with permission from the writer.

Please pay attention to the following:

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1G* Do i need to have kindle to access [CELBANPrep] E-books

Updated 2021

 
Kim,
… One more question Kim, Do i need to have kindle to access the e-books that are available though Amazon? or can i use my iphone?
 
Thanks,
R

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πŸ“± #9 CELBAN Writing ~ Writing Incident Reports

Updated 2023

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Dear Friend,
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The Canadian English Language Benchmark Assessment for Nurses is different from the IELTS because the topics for the CELBAN are familiar: about nursing or your personal experiences. For this reason the topics chosen for CELBANPrep Wonderful WritingΒ assignments are about nursing, personal experiences or something else that is a familiar topic to the writer. During Wonderful Writing, IENs work with a writing coach/tutor who provides individualized feedback on how each IEN can turn his or her weaknesses into strengths. This process continues for Wonderful Writing (CELBANPrep GOLD), where assignments are in a nursing context: assessment and incident reports.
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I was so pleased, and surprised when one of my IENs wrote about incident reports as her topic for an assignment for CELBANPrep Wonderful WritingΒ She did such an excellent job I immediately knew I wanted to post it, so that I could share it with you!
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Enjoy,
Kim
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πŸ“± #8 * CELBAN Writing ~ Incident Report. Can you spot the errors?

Updated 2023

Dear Friends,

This is a great incident report written for CELBAN Writing during the CELBANPrep’s Wonderful Writing (CELBANPrep GOLD) . It is well written, except for a few errors. Can you identify the errors?

Kim

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πŸ“‹2G* Β§ How would you correct this sentence? CELBAN Writing: Report Writing

Update 2021

Dear Friends,

This comes from a posted assignment, for the CELBANPrep Writing Level Two How would you correct it?

On July 19thΒ at 20:30H, at St. Matthews Hospital, Kim Sapno, 14 year old girl admitted in emergency room accompanied by her mother. She had a complained of right lower abdominal pain.

Try rewriting these sentences before you click on read more to see some of my suggestions. Which do you prefer and why?

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πŸ“‹3G* HOPE !!β™₯ I just got my CELBAN test result today, I PASSED!

Updated 2021

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Hello Kim,
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I just got my CELBAN test result today, I PASSED! Β S-10, R-10, L-10, W-8. Β I am really proud of my scores and I have you to thank for that.
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I was confident when I took the test because I know that CELBANPrep prepared me for it. Β I have one thing to share to you so that you can also remind your students about it.
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πŸ“‹2G* How to Create an Outline for an Incident Report in 5 minutes for CELBAN Writing

Update 2021

Dear Friends,

How long does it take you to mind map or brainstorm a comprehensive list of details to add into an incident report?Β 

I want you to do that:

  • Take out your computer or a piece of paper and a pen.
  • Set a timer.Β 
  • Start brainstorming/mind mapping as many details as you can think of to write in an incident report.Β 

Here is the writing prompt.Β 

65 year old male patient found on the floor by the elevator with IV pole.

When you are done, come back to this post.Β 

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1G*!! Keepsake: After failing the IELTS 7 x, I joined [CELBANPrep] in the month of FEB, took the CELBAN MAY: I passed!!!

Updated 2021

Kim, I was lost when I decided to finally take CELBAN. Prior to that I took IELTS more than 5x when I was in the Philippines and 2x here in Canada. I was devastated when I didn’t got my desired scores in IELTS. I had hesitations in applying for CELBAN because: first) it don’t know anything about it, second) i don’t know people or institution who conduct reviews and lastly) another months of preparation. Luckily, I saw CelbanPrep thru google… I joined in the month of FEB and took the CELBAN MAY 3. I passed! Continue reading

3G* CELBAN or IELTS: writing reviewer

Update in 2021

Hi,

I want to purchase CELBAN Writing Task Specially Writing Task 1 can you send me the link form your website so that I can proceed.
 
Thanks, A
 

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🌷☺ You always makes me feel more confident and less stressful

Updated this week

Here is an example of an incident report written by an Internationally Educated Nurse who completed CELBANPrep online course: CELBAN Writing Task 1 and CELBAN Writing Task 1. (She used CELBANPrep Writing, and accessed Writing Coaching through CELBANPrep University.)  This is the result after several revisions. What follows is a discussion between me and the IEN who wrote the report.

Here is an example of an incident report...

Incident: 75 year old man found on the floor

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